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I added the reference list at the bottom of your page for you. I also fixed a spot that had gotten a little weird, i believe you had accidentally hit the return button so it took a piece of your article and put it in a separate text box. Lebbraun (talk) 00:20, 29 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I added a few commas in some sentences that needed them. Additionally, perhaps it might help if you expand on the first sentence that introduces your article. Instead of just having that first sentence, you could also write about the actress's most notable works. For example, you could write something a long the lines of, "She is also most known for her role in the films......(insert the most famous films she's known for here)". But it's completely up to you though. Just a suggestion. Imutebi (talk) 19:59, 30 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

  • Imutebi: Your idea to revise the opening line and place in her most memorable film work is a great idea. Thanks, I'll do that right now. ("tricewilson48" 05:16, 1 December 2014 (UTC)) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tricewilson48 (talkcontribs)